Today I read a poem.
A poem about something that dominates my life.
The title caught my eye. It made me anxious. But I was already hooked.
Then, when I read, I was amazed by the way the writer succeeded in making me feel connected to his work and maybe to himself.
There was a message delivered with a blow and it hit the mark dead on.
So I wanted to leave him a comment.
And I thought about what I could write, what I should comment on.
The beauty of his words?
The painfully strong connection they made me feel?
The good structure and flow of the poem?
And to sum it up the common but still heartfelt plea and encouragement to keep up his good work?
Do you want to know what's the best thing I can write him as a comment on this brilliant work of his?
Dear fellow writer, let me tell you:
Well, in my case, it's a "she" and when I read that poem of yours:
At first she grinned knowingly.
Then at part V. she patted my shoulder whispering "Well done" in a sarcastic way. But she frowned, when